I think I've finally got what I wanted on these two shots. Re-edited from scratch instead of basing it on the previous edits. Less sepia tone, the background blurred out a bit more, and better exposure on the couple. Captures the mood and feeling I had in mind as I saw the scene.

In my mind, they are out there on the Brooklyn Bridge in their own little world saying goodbye. Haven't quite decided if it's for good or just a long time.